What I mean is:
- Who: Who was there
- What: What was the person doing there
- Where: Where is the location of where the person is
- When: When was the person doing this task (day/time)?
- Why: Why was the person doing this task?
- How: How did the person do it?
5 or 6 senses
- See
- Smell
- Hear
- Taste
- Feel (this could mean touching and emotional feelings).
- (see dead people)
Not all senses will be used in chapters or scenes such as eating (taste) unless your character is having dinner, snack, candy or whatever. Characters will not eat all the timeWhen writing senses, you might use a lot of verbs = action words.
- See: When I turned my head I saw the beautiful woman across the way. (Turned)
- Smell: I covered my nose when I smelled the rancid human waste in the sewer (covered)
- Hear: I curved my hand around my ears so I can hear her better (curved)
- Taste: I was excited because I knew I would get to taste my mom's cookies (excited)
- Feel: I felt embarrassed when found out I couldn't make (sad = emotion) and (burned = touch) my hand on the skillet
- See dead people like on the 6th sense, ghost whisperer, etc.
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